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The line graph below shows the employment rate in four different industries in Australia from 1900 to 2000.

主體段分段：

Body 1：Service(始終最高)、Mining(始終最低)

Body 2：Manufacturing、Agriculture（趨勢相似）

開頭段

The line graph illustrates changes in the percentage of people working in four sectors(service, manufacturing, agriculture, and mining) during the period from 1900 to 2000.

概述段

Overall, the service industryemployed the largest proportion of the workforcethroughout the given period, and was the only sector thatexperienced a rising trendin employment.

思路要點：

- Service Industry數(shù)值一直最高

- 只有Service Industry數(shù)值呈現(xiàn)上升趨勢

Body paragraph 1

In 1900, 45% of the surveyed population worked in the service sector. This figuregradually increased to60% in 1940 andremained unchangedfor the next 20 years, before rising noticeably to80% in 2000.Conversely, miningstarted at a relatively low level of5% andsaw a gradual decrease to2% by 1940.Aftera stable period of two decades, itcontinued to fall steadily,reachingjust 1% by the end of the period.

思路要點：

- Service：1900年為45%→隨后逐步上升，到1940年達到60%→隨后到1960年保持平穩(wěn)→到2000年顯著上升到80%

- Mining：1900年為5%→隨后小幅度下降到1940年的2%→到1960年保持平穩(wěn)→到2000年持續(xù)下降到1%

Body paragraph 2

The remaining two sectors(manufacturing and agriculture) followed similar trends. Initially, 15% of people were employed in the manufacutring sector, 5% higher than that in agriculture. Over the subsequent four decades, these two figuresgrew significantlyto 22% and 15% respectively.However, both sectorsexperienced a steady decline,withmanufacturingfallingto 10% and agriculturedroppingto just 5% by 2000.

思路要點：

- Manufacutring、Agriculture呈現(xiàn)相似趨勢

- Manufacturing在1900年數(shù)值為15%，比Agriculture數(shù)值高5%→隨后顯著上升，在1940年分別達到22%和15%→到2000年顯著下降到10%和5%

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